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what about breakfast at tiffany's? ([personal profile] kinetic) wrote in [community profile] dumping2014-09-13 02:03 pm

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writing goals, because posting them somewhere makes me accountable:
  • incorporate a wider variety of vocabulary.
  • eliminate passive voice entirely (someone is ALWAYS acting in rp).
  • vary sentence structure more; sentences need not always begin with subjects/nouns!
  • disengage as a narrator/commentator on the events (no more pithy asides).
  • unpacking my sentences while remaining direct.

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